Swimming Sun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Swimming Sun

Rating: 5.0


Freshly risen sun has shown face,
Swimming this is in sky's chest,
Swimming this is in water's chest,
No rest, no rest, this is swimming,
Creating its mirror images in pond,
Empowering every moment of love,
With its golden crown and pearls,
Sun is swimming towards Earth,
Welcoming and embracing tightly,
The pond shore grass is smiling,
Beside the flyover, near the city,
Smiling sun's swimming is reflected,
Nature's bountiful moment is counted,
Beauty's glance is justified more,
Palace inside water has whispered,
Golden ducks are swimming in joy,
No rest, no rest, fest is celebrated,
Compassionate heart is empowered,
God's grace through sun has entered,
Mother Earth's bosom is filled in milk,
For suckling the baby golden ducks,
Green juice is prepared for sun by leaves,
After swimming more from dawn to dusk,
Sun will be tired near dusk to rest,
Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly,
Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,17, May 2018. All rights reserved.

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,nature,perception
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Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,18 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2018

Green juice is prepared for sun by leaves, After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again. Great thoughts, scientific as well.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 May 2018

Dear Kumarmani, such a heartwarming prose poem....10++++

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A great imaginative write. It captures the beauty and wonders of the Sun. Yes, we could see God's grace through the rays of the sun. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2018

its been a long time i c since the sun set ur sun on o poet me why ji

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This poem is of beautiful images from nature.

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Mj Lemon 28 May 2018

The joy that the sun brings indeed is found in the life that lives in, dwells upon the waters. This work has such magnificent imagery. A great poem, Kumarmani.

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Susan Williams 22 May 2018

Swimming Sun! A perfect eye-catching title and a lovely memorable image for the reader to take away with him. Thank you!

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Unwritten Soul 21 May 2018

wonderful way of describing, you make a tale like poetry, really enjoyed it :) especially this: Sun is swimming towards Earth, Welcoming and embracing tightly,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2018

After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly....Beautiful contents! Loved reading it dear sir..Thanks for sharing! Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2018

After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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