Sweetheart Still Open Is My Heart Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Sweetheart Still Open Is My Heart

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While getting out of my heart
To lock its doors you forgot
Shall you come back or you shall not
Sweetheart! Still open is my heart.

Do you remember the carpet of green lawn
Encircled by green plants of colorful flowers
Where we enjoyed moonlight in the mild showers
Liking the wet night and disliking the dawn
In a cold weather how much we w‘re hot
Sweetheart! Still open is my heart.

Not only once many times when a trespasser
Tried to enter the green circle that you made
Why the rains stop why the flowers fade
Who erases the clouds? Are you the eraser?
Are you coming back with a new knot?
Sweetheart! Still open is my heart.

Strokes of hot winds and blows of cold breeze
Could not close the doors of a heart in waiting
Why the birds don't sing; while flying no mating,
It's too cold, my love, and before I freeze
Why I‘m hopeful you shall come at last
Sweetheart! Still open is my heart.

Sweetheart Still Open Is My Heart
Tuesday, February 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 16 March 2018

A lovely invitation to come and occupy a permanent seat in a heart left open for ever! A beautiful write!

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Rini Shibu 04 March 2018

Heart which is open forever and welcoming the sweetheart to get inside..Beautiful poem about everlasting love

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2018

Lovely! ....Strokes of hot winds and blows of cold breeze Could not close the doors of a heart in waiting Why the birds don't sing; while flying no mating, It's too cold, my love, and before I freeze....lucid expression! Loved reading it.....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 February 2018

It's too cold, my love, and before I freeze Why I‘m hopeful you shall come at last Sweetheart! Still open is my heart............still open.....Beautiful expression of past life in love and till today. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thanks.10

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