Sweet Revenge Poem by Anonymous Seeker

Sweet Revenge

Rating: 5.0


She looked in the mirror
to see what was her,
but she couldn't see anything
it was a blur.

She looked at the sink
where she spilled the pills,
thinking to herself
this is how suicide feels.

All went black
as she fell to the floor,
last thing she remembers
is him opening the door.

The look on his face,
The pain in his eyes,
as he watched the one he loved
take her last breath and die.

Smiling peaceful,
stuck in an endless sleep
Sweet Revenge,
this is how it must be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tears Of Sorrow 11 March 2008

Beautiful poem! I love the way it sounds and nicely done.

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Empath In Flames 11 March 2008

A very deep an emotive piece Coutney, this touched areas of my heart that only life can truly understand.... Thank you for sharing.

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