Sweet Poison Of Mine Poem by LINET SABASTIAN

Sweet Poison Of Mine

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Sweet he is, a great story teller
Sweet words that keep you attentive
Loving words that keep your heart glowing
How he makes you feel so special
Ooh sweet poison of mine!

How he says his heart desires you
How he intrigues you with his actions
He is a great soap opera actor
He makes you feel like his only queen
Ooh sweet poison of mine!

King of queens he is
He desires all women he can
The world of women is too big for him
He can not make a choice
Ooh sweet poison of mine!

You make me feel special for a moment
You make many others feel the same
King of many queens who is your queen
How you play with my emotions and hurt my feelings
Ooh sweet poison of mine!

Sweet poison of mine, make a choice.

Tuesday, May 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just my observation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ago Xi 24 May 2016

I love it.... keep it up

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Swalleh Ndeda 24 May 2016

it is a masterpiece, thought evoking, every line is wonderful, bursting with creativity

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Eliud Mirera 24 May 2016

Great and moving words.keep it up

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Kababi Bernard 24 May 2016

definately he needs to make a choice. This is just awesome creativity

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 August 2018

The world of women is too big for him He can not make a choice Ooh sweet poison of mine! oh how you play with my emotions and my life..... swee poison...... infatuation, attractions, the so called love all experiences of the young days....... very well portrayed. thank u. tony

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Sylvaonyema Uba 27 February 2017

Sweet poison... Love deception. Affectation juxtaposed with affection. Nicely written.

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Clémence Mujawayesu 08 February 2017

I love this poem. Great work ,Linet. We relate because we all have or have had our very own sweet poison. Sweet Poison of mine....

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Linet Sabastian 10 January 2017

Thank you for your comment.

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Karen Kerubo 28 October 2016

This poem shows some strange behavior of a lover-thanks for sharing

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