Surrender Poem by Meer Mushfique Mahmood

Surrender

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Dear, let me declare devastatingly –
To the cowardly crowd of the world,
To Apollo and all the godlike gods –
“I’m just PROUD to surrender to you—you, Daphne”.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2009

dear surrender to THY and he will have all the answers for you....10 read mine o, lord, , prayer...humble submission......all the best

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Ahmad Khalid 10 August 2009

a nice poem! you sound much greek in it than even many greeks =] and except the third line, which I think got out of balance, Its a splendid piece of poetry!

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Denvor Fernandez 06 February 2009

You are great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Meer Mushfique Mahmood

Meer Mushfique Mahmood

Juniadaha, Kushtia, Bangladesh
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