Surprising Love! Poem by Sandra Feldman

Surprising Love!

Rating: 5.0


I met you,
Way up in the Sky,
Since then,
The Stars
Can't even tell me
Why!
From you
I cannot,
Be Apart,
What have you done?
How dare you steal
My broken heart!

Monday, January 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,love,rules
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 October 2019

I cite you here: From you I cannot, Be Apart, What have you done? How dare you steal My broken heart! .....................To possess you for himself, a hypnotic love bond in the making, my dear friend, without your knowledge. Superbly suspense added to the poem, a true facinating read to me, time and again. A 10 Full score and much much more for my great admired poetess Sandra her poem Surprising Love. God´s Blessings! To MyPoemList.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2019

A beautifully crafted pretty poem, dear Sandra.....10+++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2019

Stars cannot tell you but you have met the sky and felt the love between sky and stars and among human beings. An interesting poem is well penned.10

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