Surprise Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Surprise

Rating: 5.0


While climbing a tall mountain
Short of breath as expected
Desperately trying to reach the top
I lost my sense of direction
And to make matters worse,
I lost the map I only had
Nevertheless, one trail I must follow:
To achieve my ultimate goal...
Suddenly, by surprise,
I heard a strange voice
And also felt a strong light
Blindfolding me completely
I stopped, almost paralyzed
Possessed by a great feeling
That an angel was watching me...
I heard this angel's voice
Loud and clear:
'Why are you rushing,
When you are almost there? '
Flabbergasted by this voice,
And shock by its light's brightness
Turned into a woman's form;
I dared to ask this angel...
'What is your name? '
A response came immediately:
'You can call me, Angelyna'
By surprise it took me,
Realizing then, that the woman I love,
Came back to me, but this time,
Disguised as an angel...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

guiding angel, the love of your life...even in her death, she guides you...true love indeed...

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Marva Seaton 21 August 2011

Hi Romeo I really like this poem and the story it is telling. Good writing skills, will try to read more of your poems.

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rago rago 11 August 2009

it is life.let theangel guide always..........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 August 2009

The God has sent you an Angel, in a form that you'd always want.Sometimes, our journey in life is not as beautiful as we could have wished, but we can always dream on, till the reality bites.A pleasure to read yours Romeo.

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Graham Russell 09 August 2009

whay can i say your poem was so breath taking.... thank you for sharing.

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Surya . 09 August 2009

wonderful poem.wonderful lines. voted10 surya

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