Sunday Afternoon Poem by chloe young

Sunday Afternoon

Rating: 5.0


i like sitting beside the window feeling tortured by the torrential rain, wishing that it was pounding at my surface, scratching away at my pores.

having bluegrass melodies sweeping up my ears, filling them with banjos and voices as cavernous as the grand canyon

and watching you laying on the carpet, your legs crossed, rolling a cigarette as if you were caressing skin,
being careful as if you were rolling my veins, controlling the blood flow to my heart,

making it swell to burst.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 24 August 2009

Chloe, when I started reading, (I will be quite honest) I thought that I was not going to enjoy your poem...then in you came with your wonderful ending. Once you drew the picture of the person on the carpet, you had me hooked. Absolutely loved this to bits.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Costa Anakiev 28 May 2009

What a great beginning and what a terrible word combination ending it!

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