sekharan pookkat


Sun set


Laying in a closed room
Looking through the window
Watching trees, birds, squirrels
And passengers on the road
Was not a novel feeling to me?

But now I love it ever than before

Several needles pinned in my body
Nowhere is empty
Sedatives never relief pain
Other than keeping into unconscious

Eyes becomes two fireballs
Lungs refuse to inhale
And deep breathe again give pain
Sight diminish cloudy

Songs of birds
Chills of squirrels
Leaves of trees
Flowers and bees
Are now dear to me
In this glorious sun set

Submitted: Sunday, October 13, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (10/24/2013 7:55:00 AM)

    As we approach the evening of life, certain things become dearer to us than before! When we had our blood boiling in us, we had no time to watch Nature or its serene charms! A beautiful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (10/19/2013 9:41:00 AM)

    The real man smiles in trouble, gathers strength from distress, and grows brave by reflection.
    this is the first poem i read from since i got better i am so happy i did so.......excellent sir well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/13/2013 6:17:00 PM)

    i am with needles too! ! ! And feeling better! Hope you too. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,596 Points Susan Lacovara (10/13/2013 5:21:00 PM)

    Such a sad tale, but the heart still struggles to see the beauty in the sunset, so that it can be savored...I struggle through much physical pain, on a daily basis, and found this inspiring me to push onward. Thank you for inviting me in. As always, dear poet, I wish you PEACE. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,133 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/13/2013 4:10:00 PM)

    Threaten by a potential loss of health one realizes that it is more valuable than gold. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (10/13/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    A love to nature throbs here beautifully. (Report) Reply

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