Sun's Last Grace Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Sun's Last Grace

Rating: 5.0


the blazing sun's lost in its own shine
the clouds encode each of the rays,
cotton waves of scarlet, red, orange
the last signature of the sun before
its exit from the realm of day

a sea continuously sends its
audacious smile from the horizon
a shimmering gaeity of the heart
amid miles of goodbye pounded
so loudly over the seas and so
splendidly played out over the sky
two lovers panting, hugging, kissing,
looking into each other like no light
can part them

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 25 October 2008

john, Very beautiful and graceful poems... 10.................... Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 25 October 2008

Your sunset poem is exceptional in every aspect. Strong lines and beautiful imagery. It must have given you great joy to create this one. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Tai Chi Italy 25 October 2008

What a beautiful liason to start my weekend John, and the setting is just out of this world! Smiling at you, Tai

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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