Mandy Author2


Sun - Poem by Mandy Author2

Bright shining sun,
Lighting the world,
The world revolving around you,
My world revolving around you,
Too much sun will burn,
Leave scars,
The scars heal in time,
But not enough sun,
Can cause near irreparable damage,
That can only be fixed by the sun,
The ever burning sun,
Who outshines the moon and the stars,
Who is not always good for me,
Not always best,
But the sun is what i need to survive,
So I must deal with the burns,
Heal within the light of the sun,
To see what is beyond,
I must have the sun,
To guide the way


Comments about Sun by Mandy Author2

  • Rookie Janani Jain (11/17/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    its a grt poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! sayin grt things abt our frnd 'Sun' :) :) :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Angel Micheal (11/26/2012 4:22:00 AM)

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  • Rookie Brenda Schneidt (3/23/2012 10:50:00 AM)

    i love this poem and keep up the hard work. smile smile smile (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 2, 2010



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