Summer Blooms - Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Summer Blooms - Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Fragrant summer blooms
Come in captivating crowds
Sweet butterflies dance.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 02 September 2022

Exquisite imagery. And as Bill Cantrell has observed, it also works when you read it backwards. In fact, remarkably well. Was that your intention, Rose Marie?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 September 2022

Thank you, Richard. No, it was not my intention. I haven't noticed it until you and Bill mentioned in your comments.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 August 2022

Very Beautiful! Makes me want to do over summer Bravo!

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Bill Cantrell 31 August 2022

Very nice, I also works when you read it backwards, very creative and elegant

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2022

Just right for the last Summer days. Truly enchanting and sweet.

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Rob Lamberton 26 January 2023

A whole field of flowers with a sweet smell attracting even butterflies!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 January 2023

Excellent Haiku. Sweet usage of the poetry form. The third line discovers itself in most assuring way. Brilliant

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Rebecca Navarre 01 January 2023

Such heart touching thoughts to dream and reflect upon! ... Again such beauty beyond words that I could express! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2022

Beautiful beautiful imagery with such heart moving sentiments and feel this! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2022

Lovely personification of blooms! Love the word 'crowd'. A succinct gem! Delightful imagery!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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