Suicide Story Poem by Marla bear

Suicide Story



Hi my name is Suicide also known as death.
I can come into your life if you let me.
But know your playing with fire.
I come when your feeling sad or just ready to give up on life.
You read about me in books, poems and you hear about me.
They turn to me because they feel everyone is against them.
But you wanna know something after there dead and gone.
Family members cry and friends do too.
They wonder, even question why they did that.
You have to think of all the good times you had in life.
Think before you do because there is no turning around if you do.
Why think of me when you have all those people who love you.
Think of how they well feel once your gone from there life.
Are you really ready to end it all after a few bad days.
I break familys apart everyday all over the world.
Please dont let me do that to your family.
If your feeling like this please talk to someone.
I came into your life easy so getting rid of me should be too.
My name is Suicide and I dont wish it on nobody.
Suicide doesnt have to be an option.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I thought about this poem because I was having a bad day and the words just came to me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 09 October 2013

In my opinion Suicide is a natural phenomenon which can not be stopped. the moment when some one is going to commit suicide is absolutely would have been the most conscious state of mind making him to think what he is going to do. but overall this is the result of negativity of mind when there is no path. you have said the truth in your last line. or suicide is a disease which has no remedy.

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