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Suicide

Suicide
It's all i think about
Suicide
Can't get it out
Suicide
So hard to resist
Suicide
resist the urge to slit my wrist
Suicide
wishing i had a gun
Suicide
all i have is a small razor
Suicide
so i drag the blade across my legs and arms
Suicide
wishing to do myself much more harm
Suicide
and i wake soaked in blood
Suicide
cuts all over my body
Suicide
and im still somehow alive
Suicide
deep and long so much blood lost
Suicide
how am i still here?
Suicide
I really need a gun
Suicide
one day... one day
Suicide

Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009

Comments about this poem (Suicide by Lizzie Resendiz )

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  • Celia Cassard (4/17/2013 12:40:00 PM)

    i know where you have been. ive went there before

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  • Maria Badillo (12/28/2011 1:14:00 PM)

    i agree wit yhu..i think suicide sometimes but i have someone to tlk to but i dnt tlk to them...but yhur poem is perfect 10

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  • Zack Krzeminski (7/31/2010 12:21:00 AM)

    awesome poem i give it a 10
    the way its written is really good
    hope you check out my witings on here

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  • Nemo ..Couzack (7/1/2010 8:45:00 PM)

    i agree with you
    suicide i tried 5 times
    so it's easy for me T_T

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  • Amy Marie (2/3/2010 8:03:00 PM)

    I can relate sometimes ;)

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  • Dannnielle Bratt (10/25/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    I can truely relate I have tryed to end it by cutting but it failed it's like you wrote that poem about me freE writing keep it up can't wait to read more

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  • Lii Taito (6/27/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    Wow...that's so harsh. I hope ur still alive to write more poems LOL! That was beautiful.

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  • Music 1395 (6/16/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    i get the message,
    alot of people can relate to that poem,
    love the way its written,
    god job,

    but suicide is not the way,
    no offence

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    one day... one day
    Suicide......it is all defeatist views butmany withdraw afrom race forthefear of rage or reprisals..... good write....10

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  • Matt Hartwell (6/8/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    i like it. anybody's that has felt like this can really relate to you

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