Suicide Poem by Lizzie Resendiz

Suicide

Rating: 4.8


Suicide
It's all i think about
Suicide
Can't get it out
Suicide
So hard to resist
Suicide
resist the urge to slit my wrist
Suicide
wishing i had a gun
Suicide
all i have is a small razor
Suicide
so i drag the blade across my legs and arms
Suicide
wishing to do myself much more harm
Suicide
and i wake soaked in blood
Suicide
cuts all over my body
Suicide
and im still somehow alive
Suicide
deep and long so much blood lost
Suicide
how am i still here?
Suicide
I really need a gun
Suicide
one day... one day
Suicide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lii Taito 27 June 2009

Wow...that's so harsh. I hope ur still alive to write more poems LOL! That was beautiful.

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Music 1395 16 June 2009

i get the message, alot of people can relate to that poem, love the way its written, god job, but suicide is not the way, no offence

2 9 Reply
Emma-lee Rogan 28 May 2009

you know something suicide is never the answer to anything it actually makes you feel a whole lot worse

5 6 Reply

one day... one day Suicide......it is all defeatist views butmany withdraw afrom race forthefear of rage or reprisals..... good write....10

4 6 Reply
Matt Hartwell 08 June 2009

i like it. anybody's that has felt like this can really relate to you

2 6 Reply
Celia Cassard 17 April 2013

i know where you have been. ive went there before

3 6 Reply
Maria Badillo 28 December 2011

i agree wit yhu..i think suicide sometimes but i have someone to tlk to but i dnt tlk to them...but yhur poem is perfect 10

8 10 Reply
Zack Krzeminski 31 July 2010

awesome poem i give it a 10 the way its written is really good hope you check out my witings on here

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Nemo ..couzack 01 July 2010

i agree with you suicide i tried 5 times so it's easy for me T_T

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Dannnielle Bratt 25 October 2009

I can truely relate I have tryed to end it by cutting but it failed it's like you wrote that poem about me freE writing keep it up can't wait to read more

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