Suicidal Mind Poem by Thomas Ramirez

Suicidal Mind



Suicidal mind,
Suicidal mind,
Why do you bother from time to time,
Sitting in conscience,
Always making nonsense,
Why do you put forth these binds,
Pictures of nooses tied to trees,
Suicidal conciseness who are you trying to please,
As the knot around the neck slips tight,
In time there will be no light,
The struggle for the last breath,
The suicidal mind brought him to death,
Suicidal mind
Suicidal mind,
Why don't you bother someone else next time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Ramirez 04 June 2013

thanks. I appreciate it.

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Brianna Winebarger 03 June 2013

Love the rhyme. Treat poem and i love the play on words throughout the whole poem. Really gifted

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Thomas Ramirez

Thomas Ramirez

Denver, Colorado
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