Stranger Poem by Elaheh Abdi Langaan

Stranger



Hey Stranger
Don't promise the earth
Neither i want a universe
What i'm yearning for
Is just a patience...

Friday, November 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: wake up
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem has been dedicated to an old enough one to be called a stranger who is popped out in my life in almost two days. I donna whether I've got the right to put him name here or not but I hope once I can know what's going on exactly...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 November 2017

just patience i need........ i need time.... be patient...... idea presented in few verses.. wake up! ! thank u for stunning idea- tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

We need no universe. Wake up but you do not promise Earth. Amazing! ..10

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Elaheh Abdi Langaan 11 November 2017

Exactly I meant that, really tired of promising so many thing but not having things finally I do appreciate your predicaments sir

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Gajanan Mishra 10 November 2017

just a patience I want, good one

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Elaheh Abdi Langaan 11 November 2017

We all need it, Hope God could help us but what if he needs patience too? :)

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