I'm starting to go
against
what I've been taught
i'm starting to act
a little
distraught
I'm starting to not
be me
everything
ever so slightly
changing
Oh what to do
about me and you
brilliant knoweledge
has
escaped my mind
and all the while
the clock is
ticking past time
going in circles
yet in a different
direction
no longer
clearly
do I see
my own reflection
The plants
they grow without
the sun
and I no longer
remember
where I'm from
the years go by
my memory
crys
for attention of regrets
yet somehow I've
manged not to forget.......
.............................................................The Story Of Us
The plants they grow without the sun and I no longer remember where I'm from the years go by my memory crys for attention of regrets yet somehow I've manged not to forget....... hmm sweet again a good poem..sweet.. and well wirtten, here you are again keeping variables and making hypothesis type idea in a very interesting way.. really impressed from your poems, specially from this one.. well done and liked it much 10/10
Wow. That was pure amazing. And I'm being completely honest, not just trying to make you feel good. Experimental and interesting structure, good use of suspense and great emphasis at the end of each stanza.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is beautiful i love how you break the sentences to lines its such a wonderful write! reminds me of the movie the notebook! 10+++