Story Of My Love Poem by DEEPANSHU MALIK

Story Of My Love

Rating: 4.8


HER NAME IS_______
I SEE HER TWO FACES,
FIRST WAS WHEN SHE WAS MY CLOSEST FRIEND AND
SECOND WAS WHEN SHE TURNED INTO A STRANGER WHEN I PROPOSED HER
EVERYTIME I TOLD HER HOW I FEEL
BUT SHE SAYS IT'S NOT REAL
I'VE CRIED SO MANY TEARS FOR WRITING THIS POEM
I WROTE THIS POEM FOR HER TO SEE
SO THAT SHE UNDERSTAND HOW I FEEL
NOW SHE WAS GONE AND I'VE LOST
WHO I AM, I CAN'T UNDERSTAND?
I DELETED ALL HER PICTURES WHICH WERE IN MY PHONE
BUT HOW CAN I DELETE THOSE PICTURES WHICH IS IN MY SOUL?
IN THE STARTING OF OUR FRIENDSHIP IT SEEMED SO BRIGHT
BUT THING TURNED OUT SO UNPREDICATBLE AND I'M STILL SURPRISED
IT'S DIFFICULT TO DEAL WITH THE PAIN OF LOSING HER
BUT WHAT ELSE CAN I DO
THEIR IS SOME HOPE IN MY HEART THAT SHE WILL CALL ME ONE DAY
NOW SHE DOESN'T KNOW WHERE I AM
AND SHE DOESN'T GIVE A DAMN ABOUT ME

Thursday, August 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,heartbroken,lament,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

My closed friend! We all need one; however, life is also with love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepanshu Malik 25 March 2016

yes you are right we all need one,

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Smile in you face, all the time they want to take your place. Powerful writing.

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Deepanshu Malik 04 January 2016

thanx savage for reading this poem

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Hazel Durham 22 September 2015

Bursting with pain and sadness that explodes on the page with your raw passion that is so touching and beautiful to read. Well done, I really enjoyed this beautiful write!

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Deepanshu Malik 24 September 2015

thanx hazel for reading this poem

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Maria Gonzalez 20 September 2015

This is very sad..... In situations like this, it is better not to chase, but to pull. Become very attractive in your personality and accomplishments. Then just like a light and you will attract the moth you always wanted and several moths more during.

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Deepanshu Malik 24 September 2015

thanx for suggestion tanya, i will follow your suggestion

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Charity Nduhiu 14 September 2015

I am so sorry for you because there is nothing so sad like losing a loved one but there's more pretty fish in the sea. Nice write

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Deepanshu Malik 14 September 2015

thanq nduhiu

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