Storm Clouds In October Poem by Steven Federle

Storm Clouds In October

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Grey,
torn, and twisted
they fill the sky
with the slow motion
of gods.

Scraping hills
rising past the dry heights
they promise rain
and new life.

(25 Oct.2016)

Tuesday, October 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leloudia Migdali 30 October 2016

Such a poetic description of clouds! Loved it!

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Sandra Feldman 25 October 2016

Nice take on clouds. Poetic and pleasingly original. Takes a poet to give such a beautiful weather report. Really liked this work!

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Steven Federle

Steven Federle

Cincinnati Ohio
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