Stars - A Senryu Style Poem Poem by Sandra Martyres

Stars - A Senryu Style Poem

Rating: 5.0


I followed a star
Right to heaven's pearly gates
But I was too late

The star disappeared
Saint Peter had no place for me
I am back on earth

Now if I see stars
I'll gaze at them in the sky
Saint Peter can wait

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 26 March 2010

Very evocative. You have many more poetry miles to travel. Love, SandraX

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Iron Panda 23™ 22 March 2010

sounds sparkly :)

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