Spring Poem by Melvin Hergenroter

Spring

Rating: 4.8


Spring has sprung
The grass has rizz
I wonder where
The flowers is.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
P S 31 July 2008

WOW! Your insight into 'Spring' and 'Winter' is very deep! Can't wait to see 'Summer' and 'Fall' through you eyes! ?

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Albert Wong 30 August 2008

What's the meaning '.....has rizz'? you created it yourself, , a new word rizz...you might meant it zzzz (sleep'.. This is creative one.9.

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Adeline Foster 19 August 2008

Love it! Love it! Adeline

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Frank Lee Scarlett 11 August 2008

You sure are a funny dude.

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Trade Martin 09 August 2008

Melvin....., I'm sure you are a great poet in your neighborhood...., and I do realize that you are 'attempting' to use your 'poetic license' with the (rizz-is) rhyme....., but we are revoking your license for 6 months. T.M..

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 02 August 2008

This is from ML: i have never heard such a big blob of nothing. i can't wait to not see anymore of your stuff. but i'm pretty sure i will, you're one of a kind. do us a favor and don't write anymore. don't quit your day job just yet. ;) ML

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