Split-Feelings Poem by Ashley Olson

Split-Feelings

Rating: 2.4


I'm sorry that it was you in that crash
I'm sorry that you got hurt
I'm sorry that you're in the hospital
I'm sorry that I can't be there
I'm sorry that I can't help you through this
I'm sorry that I can't talk to you everyday
I'm sorry that it happened like this
I'm sorry for every arguement we got into
I'm sorry for any stress I may of caused you
I'm sorry that I couldnt give you all I wanted to
However
I'm happy that we met
I'm happy we became best friends
I'm happy that we spent a lot of time together
I'm happy for all the good times we shared
I'm happy for everything we've gone through
I'm happy that we use to talk everyday
I'm happy for spending ISS with you
I'm happy for being able to have a class with you
I'm happy that we used to skip classes together
I'm happy for having the chance to know you
To know that your happy will make me even happier.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 27 April 2005

I actually really like how you split the emotions into the two groups........I've never seen it done quite this way.......very creative. Nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Sandra Osborne 28 February 2005

Nice poem, and the form inspired me. Thank you.

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Andrew Corrao 27 September 2004

This poem was great. It reveals a lot of compasion and love between sisters. I can realte to this in many ways and that is why i love it so much

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