Sparkling Eyes Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Sparkling Eyes

Rating: 4.5


Sparkling eyes
Diamonds lit, deep cavern,
Goblet Red Wine
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Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Wonderful imagery. Nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Jayaraman 08 October 2015

Thank you Kumarmaniji, Glad that you liked this one, I have added a few more haiku's. requesting your review and feedback especially ones on Sparrows, and few on 2-3-2 meter. thanks

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