Sparkle, Sparkle Little Star! Poem by omar ibrahim
Sparkle, Sparkle Little Star!
sparkle, sparkle little star
in your vast space in the galaxy very far
nothing can mach your beauty and power
your face! how pretty! like the face of my flower
very very big, but somehow small
in my eyes like the insect standing on the wall
a baby raises his arms, thinking you're a ball
but he feels disappointed as you're not ready to fall
sparkle, sparkle little star
sparkle and send your rays very far
there is a plant in need for your grace
and i need to meditate in your beautiful face
who can stop your shining bright
who can avoid your heat and light
only when you hide in the shadows of the night
the others have to twinkle in their colour white
dedicated to the great poet: (DEBORAH CROMER)
An enchanting read. Beautifully written, great imagery! ; D Read my, Stars, might enjoy!
good imagery used, Omar. u've a pretty good and talented poetic sense of imagination which is clearly reflected in ur words here... can't comment much on this, its not my genre of poetry anyway keep writin.
I am honored and will never forget your kindness! Pens up!
A most neat and enchanting poem. Keep writing Omar for you will get better and better at it. Don't lose hope good sir. 10++ and I wish you well, take care.
Not up to the standard set by some of your other work, try reading the second line aloud and if you can remain objective I think you will notice that it is clumsy, possibly because of straining to rhyme. Enough said, I could mention other faults but feel what's really needed is acomplete re-write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/22/2024 7:58:34 AM # 1.0.0
Very nice :) I love the rhyming.