Space Within Space Poem by Prabir Gayen

Space Within Space

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Space within Space

Whistling the song bird
alone in a silent place,
Calling for her heart's Joy
The Moon is shining bright.

Deep silence and deep Moon,
The whole of the sky is silent soon,
Overflowing the silent Joy,
No word can frame the song.

Birds are singing like joyful souls
condensed with the flow of grace,
Mystic night with mystic song,
Eternity is whisper through them.

Cloudless is the night
with bright forms,
The stars are clear with
Scintillating faces like hollow stream,
The Moon reigns supreme
among floating flowers.

Like bubbles float in the air,
Like thoughts wave in the mind,
Like emotions foam in the heart,
This night is an
effervescent silence.

Serenity and silence form the
flow of life like ocean and it's openness,
The eternal space and it's hollowness,
Thoughts and the thoughtless
Spacing,
Mind and the mindless self.

@prabir Gayen: 5: 51 PM; 7/4/20.

Space Within Space
Tuesday, April 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rudra Mondal 06 June 2020

Deep silence and deep Moon, The whole of the sky is silent soon, Overflowing the silent Joy, No word can frame the song

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Rudra Mondal 06 June 2020

Birds are singing like joyful souls condensed with the flow of grace, Mystic night with mystic song, Eternity is whisper through them.

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Rudra Mondal 06 June 2020

Birds are singing like joyful souls condensed with the flow of grace, Mystic night with mystic song, Eternity is whisper through them....

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Rudra Mondal 06 June 2020

Whistling the song bird alone in a silent place, Calling for her heart's Joy The Moon is shining bright... .......

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Rudra Mondal 06 June 2020

Thoughts and the thoughtless Spacing, Mind and the mindless self.

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Soumee Sarkar 06 June 2020

Serenity and silence form the flow of life like ocean and it's openness, The eternal space and it's hollowness, Thoughts and the thoughtless Spacing, Mind and the mindless self.////

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Soumee Sarkar 06 June 2020

Like bubbles float in the air, Like thoughts wave in the mind, Like emotions foam in the heart, This night is an effervescent silence.

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Soumee Sarkar 06 June 2020

Cloudless is the night with bright forms, The stars are clear with Scintillating faces like hollow stream, The Moon reigns supreme among floating flowers...///

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Soumee Sarkar 06 June 2020

Cloudless is the night with bright forms, The stars are clear with Scintillating faces like hollow stream, The Moon reigns supreme among floating flowers.

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Soumee Sarkar 06 June 2020

Birds are singing like joyful souls condensed with the flow of grace, Mystic night with mystic song, Eternity is whisper through them.

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