Soul Of The Ocean Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Soul Of The Ocean

Rating: 2.8


Ocean, oh my sweet ocean
I smell your scent among the forests
upon the rivers that flow.

The salty taste you bring
lingers on my tong,
part of me belongs to you
remembering how you look at me
with those watery eyes
how you take me in
like a lover.

In moon light you want me to bathe, in your coolness
filling my heart with your warmth
if I tell you something will you keep it
in your coral, in your soul whispers.

A peace of me floats on your surface
like a feather belonging only to you
so, I surrender.

How precious you are to me my endless friend
I fear you at times, your power scares me
can you believe that for a moment.
Love has no fear. I know

What you do to me, no one will ever now
just one look at you and I change, I transform
into a butterfly of freedom
you are the cocoon I live in
till my wings of color and your pattern
create me in your vision.

You are the Beloved's arms; To me
as the sun settles in your arms
saying goodbye to the world
for a brief moment
allowing the moon, her lover
to shine resting upon your arms
in the darkness.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Savita, Thank you! May you always Be Blessed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 13 June 2012

Beautiful poem. You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. Love these lines.

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You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. (Left me gasping.... may His word flows like endless streams through you...Amen.)

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Khalid Jassim 14 June 2012

its so nice poem...loved it........some words i read feel as if am reading for Walt Whitman.....good luck poet...your poem calling the anguish inside my soul............really so nice.....

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Chyna Parker 03 July 2012

I absolutely love the imagery! Perfectly stated! well done!

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Ramesh Rai 16 June 2012

soul of the ocean. Amazing. certainly a beautiful poem. the sun settle in your arms, xlent. i must like to vote 10+++++++++++

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Captain Cur 15 June 2012

I would love to pirate on this ocean. What a magnificent poem. Utterly beautiful and full of rich metaphor's and love, love, so much love.

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Randy Hogan 14 June 2012

I live in the mountains but dream of the ocean. Ode to be a turtle I wish I wish. I would love to Hold a hand that writes as beautiful as you. ~*~Randy

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Prakhar Mishra 14 June 2012

a good poem and specially when u say i ' surrender ' the greatest of all feelings all the words sounds like a lover is this 'KASIAN' way................i truly love the words when they r meant for some love concerns

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