Something So Deep Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Something So Deep

Rating: 5.0


There's something so deep, in the way
the grass moves. The earth's colors and
the hues. Something so deep, in the note's
that play. Something so deep, in the momentum
of the wave's. There's something so deep, in
the breeze. The flower's and the tree's. So
deep, the spirit moves. So deep, if you listen
too. Something so deep in the song, the birds
choose. There's something so deep, between
me and you.

Sunday, June 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,jesus,love,peace,spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 June 2019

This one shimmers with the presence of the spirit. This one should be Poem of The Day! ! ! ! No, Poem of the Month! ! ! ! No, POEM OF THE YEAR! ! ! ! ! ! ! Your beautiful pen carried me into your world straight away with the lines- - -> There's something so deep, in the way the grass moves. " There are not enough tens... but let me try! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

May God bless you and your family Always! .. I'm sorry, it's taken so long to reply, my mail wasn't working for awhile, and there's been much going on around home! .. But hope to be reading! .. Take care always! .. All the best! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Thank you! .. Susan, For wow, such a very beautiful and kind reply! .. I am glad it moved you! .. I love the outdoors and the way the Spirit moves! .. Your poetry touches hearts so deep with the magic and deep beauty weave in all you write! .. That is ever so inspiring to all! .. Thank you! .. beauty you write

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2019

Hi Becca, Wonderful profound thoughts... The way you have related the relationship between man and man, man and woman and man and nature to the supreme connect of man with God is exceptional. Beautiful. Congratulations Becca. Loved it.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, Ever so much for your beautifully kind and thoughtful reply! .. You have a deeply beautiful talent inside you that touches all hearts that read! .. Thank you! .. May God be with you and your family Always! ..

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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2019

A poignant reflection crafted in persuasive expressions with spiritual insight. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Rebecca. Remain enriched.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Thank you! Chinedu, For your beautifully thoughtful and kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting more of your deeply powerful and moving poetry! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 June 2019

A heartwarming and inspiring poem dear Ma'am Rebecca...............10+++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 07 July 2019

Thank you! .. Bernard, For your beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry of beauty and God touches many hearts! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Bill Cantrell 02 June 2019

It is in deep thought where we discover things too wonderful to contain in constant thought, it is these precious moments when clarity overwhelms us with true focus....your poem is such a treasure to read...it it absolutely enchanting! ! ! I hope this is poem of the day in the near future...it is fully worthy of such!

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