Something About Pollen Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Something About Pollen

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I saw a bee
go right down in
a fabulous cactus flower.

I saw it fly away
then go back in,
and fly away
and go back in.

It couldn't leave it alone.

It was beginning to rain.
I went in.

When I went out
it was in again.

Something About Pollen
Tuesday, February 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,flower,attraction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
16.2.22
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 16 February 2022

Beautiful poem penned; nice to read

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Lovely poem. Great power of observation and nice control on words to give expression

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David Wood 16 February 2022

Lovely poem with good imagery, but pollen gets up my nose! !

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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