Someone's Calling You ! ! ! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Someone's Calling You ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Someone's calling you across the river
To come and pick your lost dreams
The hope which slipped from you
The faith which is lying faint

O' dear regroup courage
River is not dangerous to cross
Your past is holding you back
Shed all fear jump on and cross the river

This wait will kill your creativity
critics are playing with nudity
your life demands extraordinary duty
cross the river and embrace beauty.

Why embarking is so tough
why decision is hanging in rough
come on just don't mess up
someone's is calling u across the river

Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 13 May 2016

Echo....Voice I hear now. Thanks for sharing 10

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Nosheen Irfan 02 May 2016

Wowww...what a brilliant piece. Someone's calling you across the river....this line leaves the reader breathless...a deep philosophical write that shows your extraordinary insight n vision.10 10 10 all the way.

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Kelly Kurt 29 April 2016

Many hear the call, but fear and uncertainty are strong motivators to stay put. If all could heed your message, we could move forward

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016

Across the river! ! ! Nice piece of work.

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