Someone Like Her Poem by Annette Aitken
Someone Like Her
Someone Like Her
Her porcelain skin with
candy-floss lips so
sweet and gentle
most comforting.
A waterfall of
silvery locks drape's
over her shoulder
with such grace.
Her eyes as clear as
crystal blue oceans
dives right in soaked
full of emotions
Her beauty untamed
as scored years pass.
the mirror of jealousy.
relents at last.
Growing old gracefully
surrounded by love
dances with angles
from high above.
i thought you might have meant candy-gloss, but i Googled candy-floss: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Definition of candy floss.1 British: cotton candy.2 usually candyfloss British: something attractive but insubstantial. yum, yum! where can i find a pair of those lips to press mine AGAINST? i think Annette, like another PH friend i REALLY admire, Is It Poetry, are 'afflicted' by the same syndrome: misplaced-apostrophe syndrome. ho ho. you are in good company, Annette. emoitions.............. i protest! one of me is enough! ! angles....i've seen that before, but maybe in geometry class, not high above. not that i will EVER get There! think of angels with gel in their hair. and spike heels. and that's just the guy angels! [but i think Keith has trouble with his counting. hee-hee. see his comment about angles/angels. well, at least he lovingly makes a suggestion. i just say YOU GOOFED! ] YES! i'll take 'someone like her'. make that two someones like her! i have an alter ego. bri ;)
many Easterners don't visit Google hence they call ANGELS as ANGLES which you point out slieghtly
Her beauty untamed! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.
Go on with some edition and perfection while posting. Thought is encouraging.
I love this beautiful, vivid, creative and moving write, you build the picture you are painting with your great choice of words!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like your work Annette but can I lovingly suggest some careful editing? For example, a couple of times 'angles' seems to substitute for 'angels'. You deserve the care you need to give to your poetry and your life.