Someone Poem by Asrit Pattnaik

Someone

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When I first opened my eyes I saw someone;
Who screamed at me like everyone,
I thought she was a monster;
But, she made me sleep on her gentle arm's.

I totally mesmerised with her love;
as she told me like a dove,
I grew little stronger;
But she cared me for longer and longer.

I always tried to underestimate her;
But I never betrayed her,
Later, I came to know the real love she had for me;
I felt the fault of me.

When she was gone my mother told she was no more;
My mother knew her well as, she was my dearest sister.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 21 October 2015

a touching tribute to your sister, Asrit thanks for sharing and keep writing Blessings

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Asrit Pattnaik 22 October 2015

Hmm......

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Asrit Pattnaik 22 October 2015

Hmm....

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Asrit Pattnaik 22 October 2015

Thanx

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Kelly Kurt 21 October 2015

A touching poem, Asrit. Thanks for sharing

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Asrit Pattnaik 22 October 2015

Thanxzzzzz

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Asrit Pattnaik 22 October 2015

Then thankz

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Liza Sudina 21 October 2015

But I never betrayed her, - it's good! nice poem for your sister!

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