Some Peoples Feelings While In Depression Poem by shan demmings

Some Peoples Feelings While In Depression

Rating: 4.8


As I sit in the dark, hell breaks over me
As I sit and sit I think...
I think I might kill myself
I know it's an sin and I have doubts
Everyday my words are shortning
I tend to get weaker but strong in mind
Soon i know that,
I'm going to kill myself
As soon as I do my soul
Will be sent...
Straight to hell to burn continuosly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 19 July 2008

I gave this a 9 because I suffer from depression. I understand. GW62

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Lee Crowell 15 July 2008

stay alive so that you can continue writing great poems

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