! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***soliloquy Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***soliloquy Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
heart yet knows truth gliding own reason
just as soothing breeze may be from heaven
by the quest of soul yet knowingly unknown
as we remember gleams of grace untold
breath seems to swoon by grace of rose
time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow
night still remembers wine splashing in glass
eyes looks cloudy by pangs of tears heaving shore
passion leaps up to whites of moon shining
lest glow by night may embrace glimpse
hope of tomorrow may hide in dark furrows
yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow
distance measures depth of silence
as parting slowly peels up skin of gleams
ocean stays away by the ebb in stance
yet soul oscillates as when bereft of glow
breath seems to swoon by grace of rose time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow night still remembers wine splashing in glass eyes looks cloudy by pangs of tears heaving shore yes really too poetic and graceful!
I like the third stanza: Passion leaps up to whites of moon shining Lest glow by night may embrace glimpse Hope of tomorrow may hide indark furrows Yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow. A beautiful piece you've written here. Your words flow perfectly. B.B.
First stanza first line, ‘heart yet knows truth gliding own reason’ May be truth giving chance to grasp grab more strongly… Measuring the yearning of heart When yearning is saturated truth will reveal Thyself… Thanks for such a deep diction Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
and i like this stanza.. breath seems to swoon by grace of rose time is never dispassionate even by falling of snow i really admire the poem @ all... well done Dr
i just completely adore the way you slid the words together with honest meaning!
beautiful poem with powerful expressions and depth of meaning....
My Dear Friend~ My favorite line in this is the 1st in the last paragraph Although I found a lot of depth in the poems entirety- Best Wishes~ Peace~ James
ilike these lines: passion leaps up to whites of moon shining lest glow by night may embrace glimpse hope of tomorrow may hide in dark furrows yet whisper forsakes grimacing shadow moon, glow, glimpse, tomorrow hiding, whisper, shadow. thank u for this pem. keep sharing please.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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excellent metaphorical poem, very very sad belonging to lyrism...You are an excellent Fochlucan Lyrist, Dr.Kar....thank you for sharing.... 10/10/10