Small You, Big World Poem by Lee Howlett

Small You, Big World

Rating: 4.5


VS 1

Movie cameras guiding lost souls
to the same place of lost once lost again
Drinking more to catch up with all of the before
quick note to self control your gone
Somewhere in the middle this is life

CH

Heard then forgot again
Stopped then moved away
Small you big world again

MID

Your thinking about wasting time
All of the time you are thinking

VS 2

Fly on the wall cameras on you
they know your next move before you do
Sleeping more to see if you are there
quick note to self control your gone
somewhere waiting for you is your life

Ending

Dying over and over again
like it has become apart of you
one of you in this world only one
this is how you want them to see you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 31 March 2009

I like how this poem 'captures' an awareness in segments of a life more realized in 'Small you, Big world'. The uniqueness of composition is welcomed as well. Nice!

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