** Slow And Slow *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

** Slow And Slow ***

Rating: 4.7


Sans rituals
slipped the costume
down the mounds,
silk and the zephyr
lit the fire of love
with the vintage wine,
for another night
in the nest of love

she gave in at last
slow slow the visions show
to the depth of your love
amidst the tinkle of music
for eternal breath
in the open skies

Anjali
22-01-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brishti Mazumdar 06 June 2009

Your recession of love got much kudos...I found...so I escaped and here I found the physical love...And got myself charmed...You are really capable of creating an atmosphere...No Recession..... only extension and expansion of Love, my dear....and u get 10+++....Luv - Brishti...

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an all in all exquisit piece

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Sanjib Das 16 June 2009

Anju, your poem gives me an eternal touch if something comes slow, remians long.But your title is two adjectives, in future you consider it.

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2009

hi anjali its superb.... very meaninmgful.....done to perfection....inherently musical and a hint of spirituality.....really liked it cheers an ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Lovely melodious poem.

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Rahul Aithal 04 August 2010

Very touchy. Keep writing, Anjali. Rahul.

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Boom Tish 05 April 2010

Very beautiful work.

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Joan Joseph 06 March 2010

I really enjoy this poem. It is super.

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Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Slow although, she gave in nevertheless under the open skies where the stars and the moon were witnessing the surrender. Lovely again.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

Gooooooooood one...............................

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