Sliding Doors Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Sliding Doors

Rating: 5.0


Intimidated rage on act,
Triggers the mood,
Forgets the present; an awful boredom
Hobnobs bienêtre-
Wanting to get out of the door
In a spindle with dart
Qualifying the gap between
The Sliding Doors!
Enacts the same play
Mere reaching the shores!


24/11/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2008

rightly said...such an escape desired by the thinking brain at times is hardly possible through the sliding doors of mind...intellectual write...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 November 2008

This is superb! journey through inner reality. excellent imagery! 10++

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