Blind Date Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Blind Date

Rating: 5.0


Eyes intact the light not
In somber night and as days on
Travel all through silent thought;

Steadily build the right match
Of shadow and image
All by means of proper notch;

Just by that, one image
Falters onto another and
The light seizes in haste.

Creeping without guard
Blind date enjoins heart
Abreast of juvenile faith;

Fulfilled though by the change
Paint the memory of image
Eyes met at last with blind date.


06/03/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 07 March 2009

nice --- that blind date 'eyes met at last' -10 anjali

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Ency Bearis 07 March 2009

well crafted poetic words..meaningful..nice...10

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Shymal Chakraborty 25 March 2009

I can only give 10 out of 10. Yes, life is a blind date.............Fantastic.

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Jim Norausky 15 March 2009

A well penned poem in classic style. Excellent.10 here. Jim

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Reshma Ramesh 14 March 2009

very well thought out and very well penned

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2009

yes; life is a blind travel with dates forming shadows images merging in the leading light...and eyes, those inside and outside, are the only witnesses...you think a lot and express half, Mousumi...intelligent write well composed...10

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Vaibhav Pandey 09 March 2009

briilliantly written ma'm...amazing imagery...10 for this eloquent write.

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