'Sleepless ' Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

'Sleepless '

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Thoughts of you
lit the ember of desire
slumber doesn't come
it only excite even more
this lingering innate urge
to be with you tonight!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 27 June 2012

In this sleepless night, the heroine of the past will be lingering long in your mind. Using words like' ember, slumber, linger', you have thrust a long story in a short verse. Also a psychological poem as the thoughts of the past are climbing back from the unconscious part of the mind.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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