Sisters Sojourn 56 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Sisters Sojourn 56

Rating: 4.8


YOUR laughter drips like the
rain from the sky, it hits your
vein, like a childs broken toy,
your mind lights up, as it starts
to break down, your about to
hit rock bottom, so enjoy the veiw.
YOUR laughter drips and drips....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan James Saywell 30 August 2005

this is quite good david you are reaching deeper my friend, it is original and deep within you excellent piece of work sincerely Warm regards allan

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