Sinfully Kept Secrets Poem by jai bai

Sinfully Kept Secrets

Rating: 5.0


'So Sick' like Ne-Yo said
Tha love should be pure... like a thoroughbred
So i guess mines just a mutt
Wanderin 'roung alone & dirty lookin fa lunch
So who's worse me or him
'Cus he's with her while im with him
So was it how he looked or what he said that sold me
Naw, 'cus he was sayin tha same thing he'd already told me
So maybe what i'm doin is sin
Well like Romeo give me my sin again
Or like Marilyn Monroe I'm sin but not the devil
So what tha sin that makes him so special
See he was with her to
So are his sins less than the ones I do
Maybe... see i know of his sins but he does not Know of mine
So maybe i can have my sin again
One last time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 01 May 2009

well penned........................................

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~ Jon London ~ 29 January 2009

Nicely penned piece of flowing verse....Like your deep style...keep bouncing'm out Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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yea interesting, .... it does have a sweet flow... keep it up ;)

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

wow very deep piece. i liked how it flows.

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