Silence Poem by Sarah SissonRauch

Silence

Rating: 5.0


i sleep life away today.
I remember old songs
as I go deeper in to my mind.
Inside my mind
I am still in control of where I wish to go.
The locations are boundless.
Once the terrain takes over
I am asleep in my creation

Silence
Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: relaxing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 June 2016

An insightful depiction of solitude as an abode of loftiness is well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Sarah. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 June 2016

The technique of handing over one's own self to sleep brilliantly expounded in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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