***shut Eyes*** Poem by Kaspa Richards

***shut Eyes***

Rating: 2.7


Closing my eyes so that I can’t see
Life staring aggressively back at me
With eyes shut I try and find
A way to heal this mind of mine
Coz if my problems are out of sight
It could bring a swift end to this fight
And if my problems are out of mind
I could finally get on the road to feeling fine
Going to need time, space and a quiet place
Somewhere where I could never be traced
But it’s now the case now that I'm here
That I was followed by my fear
And from inside he pushes out a tear
And in my ear I hear him cheer
So I shut my eyes and tell him to go
This must’ve been his cue to grow
Coz now when I shut my eyes and I see black space
Out of the darkness I will always see my problems face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Foley 20 July 2008

really like your style. good stuff. will share this with others.

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Roger Cornish 22 November 2007

You have a great Talent there! Keep going and don't apologise, (biog) about REAL feeling! Go for it! Well done!

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