Shuffling Somehow Is Sad Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Shuffling Somehow Is Sad
Having no cooperation to uplift,
Without uplifting them fully,
Walking by dragging one's feet,
This is really so sad and painful.
Rearranging fortune sliding down,
Quickly attaching this in row of light,
This is definitely wise act in mood,
Life needs support not shuffling.
Somehow this is bad to witness,
We have to proceed ahead in love,
Obeying God's wisdom is good,
Beauty is found in cooperation.
Shuffling we do not like at all,
Such practice does not give voice,
Rights should be urged by laws,
Beauty of humanity needs peace.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,29 October 2017. All rights reserved.
The kind and empathetic heart of the speaker in this poem is soothing, and gently guides the reader into awareness.
I really like this poem- -you picked an original topic and not only that, you gave in-depth attention to it. You didn't go for oh, how sad and leave it at that. You gave it technicolor: Life needs support not shuffling. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -And you install huge wisdom: Obeying God's wisdom is good, Beauty is found in cooperation. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Well thought out and well written. Excellent!
Life needs support not shuffling...very realistic things are depicted in this poem..really in many cases it is found that human beings behave like crabs pulling each other's legs- an excellent poem is shared..10
Having no cooperation and pulling others leg is really bad behavior... First ought to learn to stand properly.. Well written Kumar
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/28/2024 4:43:35 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Pain! ! ! ! Dragging one's feet. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.