Should I Call It Insecurity? Poem by scarlet red

Should I Call It Insecurity?

Rating: 5.0


ctrade,

Insecurity is an enemy
An enemy that is hard to beat
It’s a battle between her
And the woman inside her

It separates her from the crowd
“Them” seeing her as so proud
“Them” seeing her as a loner
With no damn good character

Oh, please tell her what to do
For she doesn’t have a clue
To beat the inner side of her
So “them” and “her” will be together


20.08.06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 20 August 2006

i would ask her to love herself...for her she is the most important thing on earth...as she learns to love herself others will love her...love...nalini

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Kelly Allen Vinal 20 August 2006

Vividly imaginative and well-written!

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Nick Percowycz 20 August 2006

I don't think anyone can give you an answer. But one thing I can tell you- don't ever feel insecure about your poetry! I think it is excellent! This poem is a ten.

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