She Is The Child Poem by Rayniece D. Clayborne

She Is The Child

Rating: 4.5


I watched the children at play.
Their very essence of innocence.
They began to stare.
They were aware of my pressence.
We see you they exclaimed.
Little giggles filled the air.
Come on out; it's ok.
One little girl walked over to me.
She extended her sweet hand.
I smiled...so did she.
I looked a little closer.
She closed her hand.
Her eyes sparkled with glee.
Wanna play in the sand?
I'm too big..Here grab my finger.
Do you like to swing and sing; my favorite two.
I know she said... I'm little you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cathy King 22 May 2008

So far, this one is my favorite of all your poems! You really packed a punch into the last line, the way the best ones do. Good job Rayniece.

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Darnetta Locker 15 April 2008

i like this peom, it has has you woundering and like the person it was the last line that was the topper.

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Greenwolfe 1962 14 April 2008

I thought the last line was wonderful. Never doubt the impact of the last line. GW62

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