She Is....My Life.... Poem by jatin rout

She Is....My Life....

Rating: 4.4


When it happens to ME…….

I thought is it really the simple boy JATIN……

Who is in LOVE…………

With a cute little GIRL…………

When I heard her Hiiiiiiiiiiiii…………..

I started flying on the SKYyyyyyyyy……..

When she started TALKING………………

It seems an express train is RUNNING……….

She behaves everyone as DEAR…….

And her heart is 100% PURE…………..

Whenever she starts LAUGHING……..

No need of laughter challenge 5,7 or 9……

When you starts CRYING…………

She always forward towards you to absorb your tears with her CARING…………….

She has a lovely NOSE …………..

Which she loves a lot (Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi) ……….

You know dear…….

Who is she? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Her name is (lucky girl) …..

And really she is a CUTEE.


One thing I can pray to GOD

To have a success in her life and her career.


Hey my sweetest and cutest girl always keep smiling, caring and be happy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Merna Ibrahim 20 February 2009

SO romantic.......wish her happy life and you as well.WOW! ! ! I guess if she read all this poems which are about her she will say immediately 'I love you...' Merna

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~ Jon London ~ 01 March 2009

Clever use of word fixing, well expressed

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premji premji 05 April 2009

jatin, love is beyond all these..............

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Ginny Thapliyal 08 April 2009

a really very nice poem....one having nd experiancing love will really appriciate it

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djean Whitney 14 April 2009

A really nice poem....one having love will reseve love and you have written this strat from your heart. This is really sweet.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

nice love story... i like it

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 06 February 2012

Lovely write Jatin, good frow...but as Premji said...love is beyond all these things you wrote....sometimes love means not looking at each other but looking at the same direction.....

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

geniune and pure love indeed...came from the heart i guess....10++

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Amelie peace 23 May 2009

that's so sweet! beautiful poem I'm sure that the she in question would adore it 10++

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Surya . 15 May 2009

genuine wishes for a pretty girl.nice to read.posted 10 surya

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