Shall I Speak? Poem by Seema Aarella

Shall I Speak?

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Inspired by poet Arkay Das's new poem 'Silence Please'

I ruffle the sleeping silence with
The melodic voice of my secret desire
That is now complete with lyric and tune
Ready to stroke and alert you
Personally, when you are all ears
Searching the stillness for a jingle of love!

I break the barrier of silence deliberately,
Smothering its dewy fragility with
Torrent of my surging desire,
Ready to flood every space of your fear
Yet keeping you consciously afloat
On the rising waves of an amorous tide!

I barge into your private silence rightfully
With an impromptu oration
Of my most revered desire
Ready to impede every other entity
To fill your hushed living space
With the sensuous rumble of my endless ardour.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2009

Of my most revered desire Ready to impede every other entity To fill your hushed living space With the sensuous rumble of my endless ardour! .....ya you must speak fearlessly and express strong desire to beloved ones.... lovely poem composed with earnest desssssire and honesty...i loved it....10 read mine anywhere.. butterflies around...... mary to marry...strong desire

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Nikunj Sharma 30 June 2009

I barge into your private silence rightfully With an impromptu oration Of my most revered desire Ready to impede every other entity To fill your hushed living space With the sensuous rumble of my endless ardour! these lines are simply great depiction of your understanding of love, desire and possession... keep up the good work...grtaeful if your could go thru some of my poems esp CAN I BE A POET TOO? and CAN I? , shall be grateful for your comments

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

Nice poem. I love the second stanza most.

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R.k Das 24 June 2009

thanx for being inspired :) spoken very intensely, thanx again.

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Surya . 24 June 2009

a nice poem on love and desire wrote in vibrant lines using simple but attractive words and lines. this para is heavy with its contents 'Torrent of my surging desire, Ready to flood every space of your fear Yet keeping you consciously afloat On the rising waves of an amorous tide! ' love this poem voted10 surya

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