Set Your Boat Along Mine Afloat Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Set Your Boat Along Mine Afloat

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Let the lamp lit by me, my friend
Brighten up your life's troubling dark,
Let sun shine from behind a bend
O leaving out its scorching ark;
Should cold shiver run in your heart
Come close to me under my care
Leaving all else in life apart,
Ready am I my warmth to share;
You by my side as I'm with you,
Let's give each other love, give rife,
Radiant but soft as dawn's dew,
What if this dew's lost by sun's strife?
Let's not just hope to wipe our tears,
Let our mutual love them prevent,
Together let us add long years
To life, let hours look like moment!
Let me full faith in you devote,
Just set your boat to me afloat.
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Musings | 02.02.15 |

Tuesday, April 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Two love birds meet. One is sure, the other a bit hesitant. The one who's sure invokes the other in a dream in this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2019

Let me full faith in you devote, Just set your boat to me afloat.......so moving. Here is the essence of the poem. A lovely poem sure.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 April 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 April 2019

Another wonderful and lovely poem, sir Aniruddha....10+++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 10 April 2019

Thank you indeed.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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