Sensor Poem by janani ashwin

Sensor



Like the radar of a satellite
High up near the clouds
You feel the pulse of my being
That least wavers in its bliss

Like the waves of delight
That sweep across the oceans blue
You touch the cord of friendship
That lies awakened in its present hue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2009

sweeping i liked...is that, that ocean blue Janani? ...blue, of course, is not your tone in these lines! 10

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