Sense Presence Poem by Robert Merrett

Sense Presence

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Lay down beside the cool waters edge to listen,
Between each ripple and bubble that glisten.
Cast up your weary eyes and preside,
This boundless pool of space abide.
Breathe in the scent of wild blossom about,
Let its atomic soul pervade throughout.
Feel softly the breeze of springs new dawn,
Caressing silently the dew against your form.
Taste the lips of passionate embrace,
The subtle hint of her tender grace.
Allow your boundary sense erode,
And return entangle to the whole abode.

Wednesday, January 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Thoughtful poem with nice diction... Beautifully penned.. Thanks. Dear poet..

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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Merrett 19 January 2017

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments Chinedu.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 January 2017

passionate embrace, good one

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Robert Merrett 19 January 2017

Thank you Gajanan for your comment

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